What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
In my opinion, the most important skill to have in order to excel in the modern world is the communication skill. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, the ability to socialize easily helps to build the connection with co-workers, which leads to great outcomes in the workplace. It is no secret that modern businesses based mostly on the teamwork. Therefore, the capability of interacting with the teammates effectively is pivotal. For instance, when I just started working as a pharmacy technician in the United States, I faced a myriad of problems at work. The pharmaceutical system in the U.S. is completely different from the one in my country. Plus, the language barrier sometimes made it difficult for me to understand patients. But because I am a very communicative person, I had never hesitated to ask questions from my colleagues, and in fact, I learned very quickly the features of the new job and became a valuable member of the pharmacy team. Conversely, if I had been a shy person, and had never asked for help from my co-workers, it would have taken a long time for me to adjust to the new system and could have negatively affected the whole team. So, my own experience demonstrates the value of the ability to interact with people.
Secondly, a communicative person has more chances to feel psychologically comfortable at the workplace than an introverted one. People spend a lot of time of their life at work, especially those who work full-time jobs. This way, it is great when a person goes to work with the pleasure and does not suffer from social anxiety at the workplace. As I said above, I am a quite communicable person. It is always easy to me to make new friends in any society. In the pharmacy where I am working now, I have wonderful relationships with my co-workers, and when it gets very busy in the pharmacy, my colleagues and I have never given up. Indeed, at the tough moments, we are joking around and support each other. It helps us to discharge the psychological tension and feel very comfortable in the very busy work environment. On the contrary, if it is very difficult for a person to interact with the colleagues, the person will be constantly stressed out at work, which can cause depression and other health problems. To that end, the socially adept persons are more likely to enjoy their jobs and keep working.
To conclude, I strongly believe that having great communicative skills is the key to success in the contemporary world. This is because it helps people to adjust quickly to the new work environment and build the connection with the co-workers for the personal satisfaction, as well as for the best of the team.
- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory. 60
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- A person you know is planning to move to your town or city What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city Why Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay 92
- Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 66
- It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n, as well as for the best of the team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, i feel, in fact, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72978723404 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91081015419 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506382978723 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4132682334 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.652173913 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4347826087 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04347826087 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139014833588 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417420246384 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554699221851 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115678288841 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667109532647 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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