New parents should attend parenting classes to learn how to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion, supported by examples from your own experience.
It is often inevitable to brought up the children in well manner, and because of that reason attending parenting seminars are undeniable. However, I agree with this controversy because, all parents should aware of their children's well being and future. New parents are busy with either scheduled job task and work stress or issue with the unemployment and searching for a good job. All in all, new parents are hesitated to cope up with the children's needs, growth and development.
Having said that, younger generations are likely to have a good position in the society and most of them are concentrating to their job scale than the children's wellness. Due to the fact that, the newly borne babies and children's are poor in health, and the parents are uneducated to deal with the health issues of them. Furthermore, As we look at the ancestors, all of them are live in one family and and such joint situation could help the new parents to treat the children in their diseased stage and even their behavioral issues as well. While today, most of the new parents are separated from their family due to the place of job, or interested to live in a city center, such factors are affected the children's growth and development and wellness. So that, parenting classes would help to mitigate the nuclear family issues and educate the new parents to treat their children in a psychologically and physically.
Wit regards to the new parents would getting information from the seminars or awareness program's for the children's well being is likely to have a good knowledge for them. Mostly, all young generations are far from the home and under pressure of job they are interested to give their children's to the baby sitter or care givers. every parents should have savvy to such person's behavior and check them regularly how they are treating the children's. As because, parents must be get attention from such classes such as how to understand the care givers help to their children.
In conclusion, all new parents must attend the parenting lectures to deal with the children's growth and development and health issues and also to avoid more complications from the care givers. Such classes have always help them to deal with their children's nicely and bring up in well manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...ors, all of them are live in one family and and such joint situation could help the new...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
... Wit regards to the new parents would getting information from the seminars or awaren...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good knowledge'.
Suggestion: good knowledge
... childrens well being is likely to have a good knowledge for them. Mostly, all young generations...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
...rens to the baby sitter or care givers. every parents should have savvy to such perso...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...every parents should have savvy to such persons behavior and check them regularly how t...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...e care givers. Such classes have always help them to deal with their childrens nicel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, look, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60619647773 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.6969571854 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.133333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323714238816 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138370868138 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478773395976 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237459178081 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359502149487 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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