Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development, however, others think the social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays the majority of countries target on a strong economy in order to improve the life quality whereas some people believe that such approach can lead to disappearance of important social values.
To be begin with, country economy is an essential aspect as it is still a clear indicator of the development level including the living conditions. It means that sustainable economy which includes well-organized labor market, a variety of industries including processing, stability of the currency and able to obtain the maximum profit from all of this and not only is effective way to create the suitable conditions for every individual. In other words the more money a country has, the better the residents live. The clear example of this can be such counties like Singapore, Switzerland and Norway which are in the top 10 rich countries and at the same time have the highest life quality.
Nevertheless, certain part of society opine that inculcating such living status may results in the humiliation of social values by imitating others culture and attitudes blindly. To exemplify, some people refuse to accept the current trends including economic, stating that such development will lead to the society imbalance and such human values as kindness, honesty and sincerity will remain on the sidelines. What is more, as they claim such way of development can increase the rate of divorces, crimes especially financial and so on.
Personally, I think that even the fastest growing economy in no way can detrimentally affect the values of society. On the contrary, it will motivate them to progress and succeed in the world of high competition. Thus, people can provide themselves with high standards of living.
To sum up, the economic development has more pros than cons in terms of advanced living standards and people should not afraid of such step as it doesn’t affect on social values negatively .It may be certain stereotype but no more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, whereas, i think, in other words, on the contrary, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15673981191 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82530891342 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1023265038 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167456368502 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591876317066 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449860625997 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871185023715 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261821498072 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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