The natural sources such as oil, forests, and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
Mother nature has gifted us many things. Those are the resources, what we have termed as natural resources, but there is warning here that these are not unlimited. There is a buzz-word among people that oil, forest, Fresh water, due to our heavy usage, are plummeting at an alarming rate. I will discuss causes along with the resolution for this problem in the essay.
From the time humans have learned about how to use the natural resources in their favor, they have been using and using without hitting breaks. For the starters, the major problem it causes is the humans will have to start looking for the alternate and surprisingly we are nowhere near. Overuse of oil raises greenhouse gases dramatically which is further facilitated by the deforestation. The population of the world is rising markedly and with that, the contrasting behavior is shown by fresh water reserves and day-by-day less water is available for each to even drink.
Even though to find a solution here is hard, but for every problem, there is a solution. We all together can contribute to this. We should start off by learning to use bicycles. Not only that will reduce oil and gas usage but will also keep humans healthy. I know there is a strong need to use timber, ultimately deforestation, but if humans plant 3 trees for every tree they cut down, then maintaining a forest will be much easier. Wastage of water reduces when there are effective irrigation systems and domestic usage. People should use water sensibly.
The government can also take necessary actions in this regards. For example, there should be a charge to use water everywhere, this will effectively bring down the water consumptions and will provide time for the resources to be refilled. Further, the government should invest heavily in the research of finding the alternate for Oil and related resources. coupling all of these with regular tree plantation programs will make a society healthier to live in.
To conclude, There is a huge scarcity of natural resources that might hit in near future and it will be better if we can realize that sooner before its too late.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Coupling
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89502762431 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58872648962 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566298342541 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4606284934 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235135638286 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666477010754 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445024714222 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140271023852 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740054921041 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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