The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
It must be concerned that man has brought about critical situation for animal species on land and under the water by doing wrong activities. This condition has led to nature devastation and extinction of diverse species. In this paper, to clarify this issue, some causes and solutions will be discussed.
One factor which has caused this issue is logging. Because of increasing population, man needs to land so, for their survival, destroy the nature and cut trees in an irregular manner to make buildings.
The other aspect is industrial toxic wastes. Many plants discharge their toxic wastes to the water without caring about under water life and creatures beneath water. Investigations show, bass fish extinction in different counties is ascribed to steel factories and authorities did not do anything at all.
Serious attempts to halt these issues must be made. Government should legislate regulations to not allow irregular logging. Also authorities must be aware of any decision about cutting trees everywhere in the country if not, set severe fines against their illegal acts.
Furthermore, practical solution to deal with industrial plant is strict alarm to prevent them from doing misdeed. Otherwise, authorities have to resort to outlaw them from working.
The obvious conclusion to be drawn is that, we must caring more about our functions. Human being means neither considering survivance just ourselves nor distinguish other creatures life. It represents look after ourselves and nature. Also, attempt to make better the situation and supervision on our function to prevent any destruction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an irregular manner" with adverb for "irregular"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...vival, destroy the nature and cut trees in an irregular manner to make buildings. The other aspect is...
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Line 6, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...lations to not allow irregular logging. Also authorities must be aware of any decisi...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'creatures'' or 'creature's'?
Suggestion: creatures'; creature's
...ce just ourselves nor distinguish other creatures life. It represents look after ourselve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43426294821 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74880766087 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669322709163 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3927054436 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2352941176 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82352941176 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815260130079 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0218204631703 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031486810782 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0384301418628 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040927836535 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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