In the last century, the first man to walk on the moon said it was "a giant leap for mankind”. However, some people think it has made little difference to our daily lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that many people consider lunar exploration unnecessary as they think that it hardly brings any benefits to common people. However, I completely disagree with such views because such mission has inspired millions around the world to believe that it is possible to achieve those things which, sometimes, may look impossible.
First of all, the results and effects of scientific experiments and researches take years to fructify. For example, scientists spend many years trying to find a new medicine, or trying to find a new fact about universe. These experiments in totality constitute the building block of human knowledge and intellect. There is a no need to correlate every event with the results produced.
Secondly, the lunar mission, in particular, helped us to understand the landscape, environment and physical properties of another member in the solar mission. It provided impetus to do further research about other planets such as Mars. Since the resources and materials are depleting on our planet, scientists may be able to find another suitable planet for us for mass migration in the future. If such events happen in the future, the first credit will go to the successful lunar mission.
Finally, we should never be complacent in our research and experiments. Moreover, outcome of a research may not always be seen immediate. It needs to be absolutely clear to all of us that the intention of the landing on the moon was not to improve the quality of our living in a short run.
Therefore, in conclusion, young boys and girls have been inspired, and have started to believe that they could achieve everything thanks to lunar mission. I am wholly convinced that it was a great milestone and will remain as an important success in human history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76456969049 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2728348296 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850441594333 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252532924294 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220605833599 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042243491286 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183029761344 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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