The mark of a successful person is to be wealthy and have a successful career.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Contemporary society has become accustomed to measuring someone's success via concreate indicators such as salary or the position which a person has in a firm or government. Although this viewpoint is commonly accepted, this is arguably not always a reliable marker, stance which will be discussed in detail below.
Primarily, an affluent person with a flourishing career may not be seen by the public as a successful person in cases where that position and money have been gained illegally or inherited. For instance, the heir of a property mogul may have a sizable bank account as well as a good career thanks largely the work done by the parent, but is unlikely to be considered successful in his own right due to the fact that he did not accomplish anything.
In addition, there are people who are respected and venerated yet who do not have financial strength or a career of standing. For instance, a mother who may do a manual job for minimum wage but managed to provide her progeny with a stable home environment and ensured they receive a decent education can in many respects be considered to have been successful.
To sum up, although it is a common truth that success of a person might be estimated via the amount of money in a bank account or/and by career, there are also people who have money and a career who are not unsuccessful and vice versa. In other words, there seems to be no direct connection between wealth, career, and success.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 255 350 //need more content. The examples used in the second paragraph are not generally for all people. How are those who gained money and careers legally, are they successful?
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 255 350
No. of Characters: 1175 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.608 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.637 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.773 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.41 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.724 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75984251969 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71395803784 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2685206515 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.125 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282313019303 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126016540841 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597530792759 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165364494774 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677734211253 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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