Many Countrymen are interested in living in big cities. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
Nowadays, there is a strong tendency among countrymen for moving to metropolitan cities. They believe that the main part of the country's revenue is devoted to big cities and government authorities pay no attention to the rural areas. The lack of satisfactions among residents of rural areas may lead to a sophisticated problem which is overpopulation in mega cities that is the result of scarcity in educational equipment in small towns and deficiency in medical treatments.
The most important reason for countrymen's migration to big cities is lack of educational facilities in these areas. Children can benefit the educational system just until they finish the elementary school and after that they should go to big cities for continuing their education and their family usually accompany them, since they cannot abandon their newly matured fellows to run their solitary life. The families believe that evil people who are looking for preys in metropolitan cities may corrupt their children by deceiving them and compel them to commit crimes such as smuggling, trafficking and the like.
The other crucial cause for this issue is deficiency in medical services in rustic areas. It is believed that all people should access the free and decent treatment in all parts of a country but unfortunately the residents of country sides should go to mega cities in order to access the medical services and consequently they have no other choice but to stay in hotels which is irritating for the whole family and it costs a fortune for the patient and the family. To tackle these types of difficulties the countrymen prefer to move to metropolitan cities. To prove my claim, I can refer to an article, having been published in Times magazine, indicates that 40% of countrymen migrate to big cities due to the scarcity of good medical treatments.
To sums up, the number of immigrants to big cities is on the increase and it should be tackled by governments by providing nice educational facilities and decent medical services. If government authorities neglect about this issue, the country sides will be deserted in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...scarcity of good medical treatments. To sums up, the number of immigrants to bi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10571428571 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82917886695 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517142857143 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.239451851 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.916666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818652689282 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423271622079 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397187110594 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516067103018 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198672156293 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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