A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
In the words of Nelson Mandela "Education is the most powerful weapon one can use to shape the future".A curriculum need to incorporate goot quality content which has all the elements which are essential for not only academic but also over all development of students. A national curriculum will be more appropriate beacause government have the access to resources and erudite work force to come up with best possible national curriculum.
First and foremost a national curriculum will make it possible to conduct a general national test to evaluate all the schools in the country on common basis. This will decrease the load of scrutinized observations of schools independently. Furthermore, it will also enable the students to interpolate their academic position in the country, hence will give them the incetive to work harder.
Moreover, aside from providing a common test plateform common national curriculum will also ensure the quality of education. Government of any country has an education commitee which have the most skilled, talented and erudite teachers and educators associated with it. Hence, the curriculum decided by the government will be premium and top notch. Government also has the funds and resources to carry out the curriculum prepration dilligently which schools can not afford to do individually at the same scale. Government can also conduct surveys and studies to come up with a relevent and wholesome curriculum.
However, critics might argue that a common national curriculam will give the power over entire education system in the hands of a single entity, the government. Henceforth, government might abuse this power to incorporate government agenda into the education. Howerver, this might be the case in countries such as china or North Korea where the government is not democratic and answerable to the common people. Although, in democratic countries people have an oversight over the work of government hence this will protect the state from using the national curriculam for its own gain.
To conclude, the nation will benefit from a common national curriculam as it will provide a common evaluation plateform for all the schools in addition to a wholesome curriculum with better quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
...d by the government will be premium and top notch. Government also has the funds and reso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37960339943 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94450813565 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495750708215 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7530739772 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20093292921 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749834164698 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638531545083 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132654627864 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361601613359 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.