Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my life, I have some close connections with a small number of people. However, I believe that it is the lucky of me when having they in my life. Some people argue that maintaining friendships with a small number of people is happier than making many new friends easily. In my opinion, I absolutely agree with this idea. I see in the period that I have lived and I think that these small close friends have very important role with me.
When you have a lot of friends, it is unable for you to keep the close relationships with all of them. As a result, in those friendships, they mainly are not close friends. I want to ask you a question: "Why do people need close friends?". Let me explain to you the reason. People cannot live all their life without the negative time. Of course, in these time, people have necessity to communicate, to share their story and even need a support. In those cases, close friends usually who people they find first. When you in a close relationship, time to time, people in this relationship share favorites, understand behaviors, enjoyings of each other. It is a fact that people must feel secure when they share about issue of their life, and I believe a close friend is a good person for they to share. In general, after reading about my answer for above question, you surely know why you need the small number of close friends.
Additionally, the most important reason that people should have close friends is the devotion. I mean it is the sincerity with the rest person in a relationship. Modern day, people with a lot of relationship from home to office, social, so it is very difficult for people to have close relationship. In one relationship, people often must doubt if they help me because just they want or other reasons. However, if people have just one close friend, they will not must worry about this problem. For example, when you have an issue and need a big amount of money, you do not have enough. After that, you must borrow people in a lot of relationship you have. There is a sentence that: in the difficult, you will know who is your friends. I believe in this case, from all of your friends, close friends are only people help you without reasons, they help you because of you. And how do you will if you have a lot of friends that you have easily? In basically, maintaining friendships with a small number of friends is more important for happiness than having new friends easily.
Some people can say that there are many friends will help people to have more ability to develop in their work or their future. I do not say that having many friends is negative. Here, I state that if people want to happy in their life, the close friends will have value more than friendships that you have them easily.
In conclusion, I want to repeat again the role of close friends in the development and happiness of each people. If you have had those friends already, please treasure them. And if you have not, let find them now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ife, I have some close connections with a small number of people. However, I believe that it is t...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...argue that maintaining friendships with a small number of people is happier than making many new ...
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Line 3, column 986, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...basically, maintaining friendships with a small number of friends is more important for happiness...
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Line 3, column 1076, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ppiness than having new friends easily. Some people can say that there are many ...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...them easily. In conclusion, I want to repeat again the role of close friends in the develo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for example, i mean, i think, in conclusion, in general, of course, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 43.0788530466 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2451.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53049907579 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49328727289 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.37707948244 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5988880178 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.59375 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.90625 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299607100267 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101816850583 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092070338201 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192244169927 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696335564873 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.