The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that some people believe that advertisement is useless or detrimental to their society. While I consider that this would drawbacks of this industry, I believe that it should not totally prohibit.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why advertisement has the adverse influence on consumers. Firstly, the growing popularity of violence advertising on television has resulted in an increase of crime rate in the society. If advertisements involved in violence are broadcasted during the prime time television every day, children could easily learn how to turn into crime in the future. Secondly, a number of advertisements which promote various products such as toys, aimed mainly at a target audience of children and adolescents. For example, many children easily swayed by commercial advertisements such as milk or cookies, so they put pressure on their parents to buy goods impulsively.
On the other hand, I disagree that local and national authorities should impose an official ban on all forms of advertising because of some undeniable benefits to the public. Firstly, the advertising industry has an important role in the growth of the economic nation. Without the presence of advertisements, economic of the whole country could severely suffer because people who used to work in the advertising industry are now unemployed. As a result, this would lead to a rise in the unemployment proportion. Secondly, millions of companies take full of advantages of advertisement developments in order to maximize profits with a hope that it may attract potential customers in the short term. For instance, in the field of the beverage industry, most companies try to promote their type of different beverages with a high quality as well as a reasonable price through social media or television. By adopting this policy, companies can reach their goal as earning more money.
In conclusion, although there are some negative effects of advertisements, I consider there is no need to ban it completely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25308641975 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11749174225 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577160493827 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7583813666 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.466666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163469345797 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502640833019 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495980663612 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851251548206 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448809838632 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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