What is very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?choose on skill and use specific reasons and example to support your choice.
in our today copmlex worl, many things effect human life, so, having a special skill giva chance to persons to be more convenient during life. personally, in my view, thinking is a very important skill for all people. i'll explain and present a few reasons as most important reasons in follow.
in the first place, thinking help to improve our life in every period. when we are young child, young, middgle-aged or old. acting by thinking in every step will show us as wise amn.let's explain by using an example. when we are young if we think about our future correctly we can recognize what will be the best decision for our future? working or studying? marriaging or staying single? i believes if we think and use it deeply by taking into accouny all aspects, it give us best result. therefore, thinking will help us to have a hopeful forthcome.
secondly, the importance of thinking will show more in the critical situation. i mean that during of our life we have some critical moments that our acting is very important and wil ahve significan influence on our life. such as shen we drive. certainely every body expeienced driving in hard and terrible condition like dangerous road or maybe bad weather condition. in those moments apart from experiences, thinking would be a skill thta save the life of someone that are with us. good thinking will result a right descion in vital times.
finally, thinking also is useful when we put in the new situation. when we change our job or being fimilar with new individuals, thinking is way to act in a right way. aslo, help us to be adopted as soo as possible and learn how we should beahve in ne situation. therefore, thinking, thinking contributed to be more adopted soon and runing away from some bothering things in new situation.
taking into account all of those reasons that i mentioned above will help us to understand and appreciate the importance role of thinking as skill in the whole life. the advantages of thinking is not only making a suitable decision in any age we are, but also help us in critical condition and moments.totally, if i want to learn some basic thing to my chlids in the future, i will learn them the way of thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, i mean, such as, in my view, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 388.0 270.72406181 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67268041237 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60708966399 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518041237113 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 419.366225166 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.97473842 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8260869565 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 4.19205298013 739% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139472827787 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430061360539 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459196544725 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991948725459 0.162205337803 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065841177583 0.0443174109184 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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