TPO INTEGRATED 34
There has been a debate why the sea cows extinct? The reading provides three theories for the extinction. However, the reading opposes and mentions that all the theories have some problems.
The first point of dispute is if the overhunting by the Siberian people cause the extinction. The lecture says that the sea cows were massive creatures and the weight of one of Them is about 10 pounds. One sea cow could feed a whole village of Siberian people for a moth. But, the reading refutes, saying that the Siberian people over hunted the sea cows and that leads to the extinction.
Another controversial issue is if the ecosystem disturbance causes decline in the kelps population which leads to the extinction. The lecture contends that the ecosystem had no effect on the kelps population. There were no evidences in the decline in the whales population. But, the reading opposes says that the ecosystem causes decline in the main sources of food for the sea cow. And that leads to the extinction.
The final issue of dispute is if the European fur traders cause the extinction. The lecture says that the sea cow population were already in decline before the arrival of the European fur trader. Other thing caused the extinction. Yet, the reading refutes saying that the European fur trader caught the last sea cow in the island.
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- TPO INTEGRATED ESSAY 43 73
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...extinction. However, the reading opposes and mentions that all the theories have ...
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...t all the theories have some problems. The first point of dispute is if the ove...
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...ows and that leads to the extinction. Another controversial issue is if the ec...
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...ystem disturbance causes decline in the kelps population which leads to the extinctio...
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...xtinction. The lecture contends that the ecosystem had no effect on the kelps pop...
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...hat the ecosystem had no effect on the kelps population. There were no evidences in ...
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...cow. And that leads to the extinction. The final issue of dispute is if the Eu...
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... The final issue of dispute is if the European fur traders cause the extincti...
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...nal issue of dispute is if the European fur traders cause the extinction. The le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94805194805 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61207974403 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 145.348785872 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458874458874 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6742075505 49.2860985944 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4375 110.228320801 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 7.06452816374 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478184845276 0.272083759551 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164882703029 0.0996497079465 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994684006865 0.0662205650399 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294455329333 0.162205337803 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054328675338 0.0443174109184 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.3589403974 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.