a fossil skeleton of a dinosaur
the article states that ther are many evidences that shows that the Sinosauropteryx wasn't feathereed dinosaur and provides three reasons of support. the professor explains that the evidenc are very strong and the mentiond reasons in the article are unconvincing and refutes each of the author's reason.
Firs the reading claims that the fine lines in the Sinosauropteryx' fossil don't belong to the functional structures of a living dinosaure because they may formed after animal's death. The professor opposes this reason by saying that if it is possible to creating this fine lines after dinosaure we must see such simmilar evidences in another dinosaure fossils. she explains that the ashes preserved the dinasure's functional structure very well and this fine lines dont formed later.
second the reading deems that this fine lines dosent show that this lines are belongs to certainty which part of the dinosaure's anatomy. the professor states that if this parts of the dinosaure called frail we must not find betacarotene protein in these structure but results showed that there are this kind of protein and we ought agree that this functional structures may dinosaure's featheres.
third the reading arves that the main application of the feather in the birds are help to fly and regulate their internal temperature. however, the professor opposes this reason by giving an example of pico one kind of the birds that have just a long feather on its tail it acts as a distinct feature for them. the experiments have shown that the color of the dinosaur, feather are oranges and white it seems to be an idea for displaying
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ces that shows that the Sinosauropteryx wasnt feathereed dinosaur and provides three ...
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...l structures may dinosaures featheres. third the reading arves that the main applica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, so, third, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03345724907 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60037639737 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527881040892 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.2858981872 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156919715716 0.272083759551 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644486774393 0.0996497079465 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579866382227 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895668745919 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045565143921 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.