TPO24-integrated writing
The reading and the lecture materials have a debate on the identifications made about a 70 million years old fossil of Tyrannosaurs rex. The writer believes that T rex’s fossil contains many actual tissues, which is refuted by the lecture.
First of all, the writer states that the scientists find some soft substance in the leg bone and they believe that this soft substance is the remains of the actual blood vessels of T. rex. However, the professor opposes this claim by saying that the soft flexible substance inside is traces of soft and moist residue from bacteria colonies. It is because after an organism is dead, bacteria sometimes colonize hollows in bones, which leaves behind traces of organic materials.
Moreover, the writer says that spheres with iron and red centers could be the remains of red blood cells, while the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle. The professor says that scientists also find the reddish spheres in fossils of other animals that were primitive living organisms in the same place. To be specific, those animals had no blood cells, so the spheres cannot be the remains of red blood cells. Instead，they may be pieces of reddish mineral.
Finally, the writer says that scientist found collagen, which is considered to be in connection with bone tissues. But the professor holds an opposite opinion: collagen cannot survive for so long since the oldest collagen dates back to 10,000 years ago. And the most likely explanation is that the collagen is not from T. Rex but it may come from the skin of the researchers who are handing the bone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 270.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50503197289 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8211299385 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450927406499 0.272083759551 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139227182453 0.0996497079465 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826422825103 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23484226328 0.162205337803 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611015295182 0.0443174109184 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.