Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playgrounds.
Throughout history, entertainment has played a prevailing role in every individual’s life. In this regard, there is a long-standing discussion among academicians about whether government should spend more money on development of art and music or improvement of recreational centers. Some people are the leading proponents of the claim that we should put more emphasis on facilitating recreational centers. But, I firmly believe that development of art museums and concert halls has many far-reaching impacts on our society. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoints through three reasonable reasons.
It is no secret that improvement of art museums and concert halls contribute to an increase in the number of people that want to attend such events which leads to an increase in the amount of tickets that will be sold. So, government could support musicians and other artists financially. For example, a musician rents a hall. But, people do not have interest to attend this event because their previous experience of such events is full of shortcomings such as lack of air conditioner. As a result, the musician efforts will not be paid off.
It goes without saying that supporting of musicians and artists fosters every society‘s culture. When government supports artists, they could prepare themselves for international competitions. By attending such events, they could introduce their culture to other countries. As a result, they encourage foreigners to come to our country. So, it leads to a better tourism industry. A survey on the effect of government’s support of art on tourism industry has revealed that the possibility of establishing a successful tourism industry could be increased up to 20%.
Psychologically speaking, art has many beneficial influences on individuals. It provides a platform for them to express their emotions. For example, you feel melancholy, and you have difficulties realizing your real emotion. So, you cannot express your feeling. In this case, a beautiful blue song could make you cry or give you solace. Besides, nowadays artists share their feelings about social issues in order to makepeople aware of its consequences on society. So, they pave the way for improvement in people’s right in the society.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that improvement of concert halls accounts for supporting of artists as well as fostering country’s culture. Furthermore, no one could underestimate the profound effect of art on people’s mental health. Also, authorities should put emphasis on development of concert halls and art museum to establish a successful tourism industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45584725537 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29634622918 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534606205251 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8954475682 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9230769231 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1153846154 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217759746233 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533102329662 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434080338445 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119814432702 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405281410622 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.