there are many different types of music in the world today. why do we need music? is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Different kinds of music is said to be existing all around the world. The effect of this on our life is a matter of discussion whether the traditional music is better than International one or not. I, for one, think the music affects our mentality deeply. Investigating the contribution of listening to music to our attitudes toward life and also clues about the personality we have shows this.
Music can have impact on our way of thinking about life. For example, if we listen to sad songs all the time, we will transfer to a depressed person. By way of illustration, there are many people who committed suicide by hearing gloomy Sunday. So, it is plausible to say music has effect on our vision about life.
We can guess some traits of every person by means of what they hear. For instance, cheerful people always listen to up-beat and happy songs. People can express their feelings through lyrics and music itself. Therefore, it is acceptable to say what you hear shows who you are.
As for the dominant of traditional music to International one, I can say it depends on personality. These days International music is more popular among youngsters and they can communicate better with that.
All in all, music should be considered as a way of communication. Take everything into account, I dare say, both classic and modern music should be paid attention equally. So, in the foreseeable future traditional music is going to be as popular as modern one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, as for, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81349206349 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77973570453 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5574832548 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3529411765 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328082324948 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117090984397 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697447982846 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193138424082 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770783895949 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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