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Students have to spend a great deal of their time at schools and study hard. So this is important for children to have a motivator to study hard. In this regard, I have to admit that I totally agree with the statement which says parents should offer financial aid to children for gaining mark. I have a couple of reasons in support of my view and I will elaborate my reasons in this essay and try to shed some light on my perspective through ample examples.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that in my point of view money is a tools to engage children to study well at school. The story of my cousin could reveal my idea. As a ten years old boy, he prefers to spend most of his time play video games. His mother had to use a different strategy to promote his children to study. Finally, his mother asked him to rise his grade, as a result, she will give him a considerable amount of money. To make a long story short, that mechanism really works for him and now my cousin is number one student in his classroom.
From another aspect children feel more responsible to their task. We should bear in mind that children have to deal with the difficulty of their future and they must prepare for new roles in society. Children have to learn the importance of their efforts, they could earn money only by hard working. My personal anecdote will well demonstrate this point of view. My parents taugh me to study hard and if I study enough they give me money. This way of working shape my mind logically, working hard equal to earn money. Consequently, my parents convey how to deal with my career to do my best.
Meanwhile, an increasing number of parents believe that by offering money for rising grades, children will look forward for parents’ aid, while grad is inseperable part of study and children must do their best at schools without asking for money. These kind of people blame money as a motivator for other kind of aggressive behavior. Children will impolite and ask for money not to do so.
Taken all aspects mentioned above into consideration, I am pretty convinced that there are a number of benefits to foster the idea that parents should financial supports for children to increase their grades.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a tool' or simply 'tools'?
Suggestion: a tool; tools
...ed is that in my point of view money is a tools to engage children to study well at sch...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...st at schools without asking for money. These kind of people blame money as a motivator fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, look, really, so, well, while, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5536159601 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45751710112 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511221945137 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3404447764 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9523809524 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0952380952 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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