You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and
ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.
Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to enquire about some electrical goods that I need to buy or order.
My new office will be open in 1 month and I need some electrical equipment for this purpose including 2 laser printers, 2 computer cases and monitors as well as an oven. I would like to know if you have these commodities at your shop or if you do not have them at the moment, is it possible for you to order them within the next 2 weeks?
The expenses of the delivery and the price of the aforementioned objects are of high importance to me and I would like to receive a factor for all of these services. Moreover, I would like to know how long you will be able to hold the appliances for me in your shop since some of them are bulky and it is feasible that you do not have enough space for them.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22485207101 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3918503603 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7476761523 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349465812827 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132034566653 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109645865803 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185657988399 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865779447712 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.