Global Warming
Recently, the global warming has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world. Although it is a widespread belief that the matter of preserving of the environment is intrinsically rewarding, there are a fair number of people hold the opposing view. I am, however, inclined to believe that one should carefully weigh up the pros and cons of it.
Firstly, from a social point of view, ozone depletion is intimately bound up with deforestation, which means it might be the contributory factor in both desertification and co2 emission. For example, a group of eminent scientists working at a prestigious university undertook a longitudinal study to demonstrate the nature of the relationship between fossil fuels and rising in the earth temperature as well as deforestation rate. Therefore, the conclusive evidence presented thus far support the contention that pollution correlates positively with not only burning the coals but also diesel oil.
In political terms, renewable energy is undoubtedly attributable to modern technology, in that it would lead to electric cars, solar power, and wind turbines. A striking illustration of such attributions is the greenhouse gases, which are the underlying cause for concern since the government officials have overlooked in taking it for granted. Had they contemplated it in advance, it might have had the opportunity to protect the planet. Thus, new sources of energy could play a dominant role in nations' prosperity.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the advantages of academic research in global warming are of more significance. However, the local authorities are recommended to enact some tough legislation to minimize undesirable side effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...Recently, the global warming has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45692883895 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23927385645 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677902621723 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7926656391 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139187389412 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531993173149 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119136039993 0.071462118173 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962263366668 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981100558468 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.