The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts compares the proportion of water used in types of different aims in six different region of the world.
In general terms, there are variation in terms of using water purposes in six areas on the global. Besides, the pie charts show the percentage of water use for Agricultural has highest proportion in Africa and Central Asia then other areas ( 84% and 88% respectively).
It is clear from the pie charts show that most of region use water for Agriculture purpose, exception in North America and Europe where water used for Industrial account highest proportion ( 48% nd 53% respectively). In contracst, only 5% of water was used for this aim in Central Asian.
On the other hand, the percentage of water used for Domestic purpose has lowest proportion comparisons to other purposes. In South America, the percentage of water used for Domestic aim account highest proportion ( 19%) while In Central Asian and South East Asian where water used for this purpose have lowest proportion ( only 7% for both this areas).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: regions
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Suggestion: has the highest
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...Africa and Central Asia then other areas 84% and 88% respectively. It is clear f...
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Suggestion: account the highest
... Europe where water used for Industrial account highest proportion 48% nd 53% respectively. In...
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...or Industrial account highest proportion 48% nd 53% respectively. In contracst, o...
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Suggestion: has the lowest
...tage of water used for Domestic purpose has lowest proportion comparisons to other purpose...
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Suggestion: account the highest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the lowest'.
Suggestion: have the lowest
...Asian where water used for this purpose have lowest proportion only 7% for both this areas...
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Suggestion:
... for this purpose have lowest proportion only 7% for both this areas.
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ave lowest proportion only 7% for both this areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, then, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94186046512 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60200239072 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494186046512 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7715105447 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493074580029 0.215688989381 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262186622223 0.103423049105 254% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598552056108 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335126194413 0.15604864568 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624498058634 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.