Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most of people are involved in any of company but on the one hand, some people want to spend all working life in same institution while on other hand employees find more beneficial to work for different organizations. From my point of view, changing the work place after some years of experience is more fruitful rather than working on same organization for whole working life. This essay will discuss both views of choosing working life.
To begin with, there are some employees who strongly believe that it is better to work for same company. One of the significant reasons is that the position will be secured for future also. Similarly, being a part of same organisation for long time provide them rewards, bonus and promotion too. In addition, it is safer to work in environment where we have spent ages which further helps to build self- confidence for employees in some conditions.
However, it is considered by some workers that working in different environment provide more benefits to them. The reasons behind choosing same place are several but one of the main reasons is that new places always provide new experience and opportunities. Likewise, some workers desire to take risks so that can improve problem solving capacity and learn new things. Moreover, working in completely new surrounding makes the person creative and innovative.
The survey conducted in America has announced that working in same place for ages is quite frustrating while in new place is more challenging. So, most of American have chosen to work in different environment rather get hooked to same place.
In conclusion, there are many benefits and drawbacks for working in same place or in different places. Although, everything has positive and negative aspects I strongly believe that new place means new opportunities and challenges. So, I would to love to work in different working place which is very exciting while same place is really boring to work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
Nowadays, most of people are involved in any of company but on t...
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Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to work'.
Suggestion: to work
...say will discuss both views of choosing working life. To begin with, there are some ...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...the position will be secured for future also. Similarly, being a part of same organi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, moreover, really, similarly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09287925697 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71527794725 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5399786894 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427245551385 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160885349772 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10525592649 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256448541991 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121831095693 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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