Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this era, People are spending their most of the time in their jobs. Nowadays, it is believed by some of the folks that they should work for the same company all their working life while other argued that they should change the company as per their conditions. From my point of view, I agree that people should work for the same organization. This essay will analyze both the views properly.
On the one hand, people working in the same company are treated as loyal employees. Similarly, they can gain great respect from other employees and can be promoted to higher officer. Furthermore, Government companies provide the system of pension to the employees who work for more than 25 years in the same company. Also, it will be easy for the people to cooperate with other employees if they work for the same company. For instance, People will get rewards and bonus in several occasions if they work for same company. As per the recent studies in UK and USA, it is known that most of the people are working for the same organizations.
On the other hand, it is denied by some people to work in the same company. First and foremost, they cannot shift to other company if they find the salary more than the company they are working for. Secondly, it will be more beneficial to move to other companies and get proper links to many other peoples.
In conclusion, it is the people who should be aware of choosing the right company for their future success. By analyzing both the views, I would strongly recommend people to seek for the company whose reputation is higher than other companies. In addition to this, folks should look for the organizations which are more flexible as per their needs and perspectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69867549669 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42673668098 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443708609272 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2203715644 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39441922106 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164121235825 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913922717524 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267166475851 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843669800657 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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