The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The mentioned diagrams illustrate the different phases in development of adult salmon which is a species of large fish.

Overall, as is represented by the diagrams, there are three main stages in the lifecycle for complete development of salmon from eggs to adult which takes about a decade to reach the open sea and as it grows the size of the salmon varies in each of different phases.

In the beginning, the salmon eggs are found in the upper river which is slowing moving where the salmon eggs reside under the reeds between the small stones for approximately 5-6 months. After that, eggs are turned into small fish which is called fry that grows up to 3-8cm in length.

In the next phase, fry moves towards the lower river which is fast flowing where it spends nearly 4 years of its lifespan. Then, after four years the size of it grows the up to 12-15 cm which is known as ‘smolt’. Next to it, for the growth of adult salmon it takes about 5 years and grows up to 70- 76 cm long. Finally, the salmon completes its journey of lifecycle from the slow moving river to open sea after nearly about a decade.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich is called fry that grows up to 3-8cm in length. In the next phase, fry mov...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifespan. Then, after four years the size of it grows the up to 12-15 cm which is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53921568627 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42011943617 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0925357921 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117837514436 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061032505983 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559903115832 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970461885221 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602327769741 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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