There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that Money is the main reason.
Do you agree or disagree ?
It is claimed that a number of reasons lead to employees remain working in the same corporation. While, others argue that the primary motive is salary. I completely disagree with this statement, having close-knit and supportive work environment and getting allowance are the motivation for being loyal in one company.
The condition of work environment could be strong reason for staying in one enterprise. The employees are spending a half day with their colleagues and when they have problem in the occupation,they should be supporting and assisting each other. Unconsciouly, great teamwork and kinship have built. Moreover, the employees get kind and understanding leader, they will feel more pleasant and endure. Thus, the workers might consider for one thousand times for switching job because of small posibility to meet same form of workplace. A survey conducted by Harvard’s students, 9 of 10 Bank of China’s staffs said,they will not move to others bank owing to convenience of workfield reason.
The employees who work at same company for long term are receiving grant. All of allowance include to healthy insurance, pension fund, mortgage. It really beneficial ,the employees do not need to worry about urgent need and their future anymore. They main focus only for giving best performance and improve the productivity. For instance, Google as biggest technology company provide complete allowance for their employees
To sum up,two reasons that employee are working for many years in one company are surrounding by helpful peer or leader and obtaining subsidy from the company.
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- There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company Some believe that Money is the main reason Do you agree or disagree 87
- with the increasing popularity of computers and calculators, student literacy is decreasing dramatically. what are the positive and negative effects the progress of science and Technology has brought about ? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: , they
...when they have problem in the occupation,they should be supporting and assisting each...
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Suggestion: , they
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Suggestion: ,
...ion fund, mortgage. It really beneficial ,the employees do not need to worry about...
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Suggestion: focus
...ent need and their future anymore. They main focus only for giving best performance and im...
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Suggestion: giving the best
...uture anymore. They main focus only for giving best performance and improve the productivit...
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...lowance for their employees To sum up,two reasons that employee are working for m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, really, so, thus, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41832669323 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91035243011 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9459846075 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239741063562 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770871325025 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688359621623 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158204877893 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472654865587 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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