If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose?
Nowadays, the climate change of the north pole has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether studying about the changes in the north pole’s weather is a reasonable decision or not?”. It is a widely held view that surveying the ecosystem of both poles is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that more studies must be carried out to protect this area.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the north pole as a significant habtat for widelife plays a vital role in the developing world. Therefore, I express several reasons why I have chosen this region. First and foremost is that both poles are the only habitat for some unique animals, such as white bear and penguins that their lives are impossible without ice. Secondly, it can be argued that recently the global warming is threatening this area that leads to melting ice caps, subsequently increasing the sea level and destruction of the ozone layer. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that greenhouse gases that emitted from industrial factories endanger the aquatic ecosystem of the north pole.
However, there is no doubt that various informed decision must be made to address this crisis. It should be taken into account that the government must encourage the factories to relocate to the less beautiful areas by offering loans. Moreover, it is quite clear that tougher laws should be obtained in order to reduce over-fishing and poaching.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that by making the suitable decision we will be able to prevent the negative effects of climate change in the north pole. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ate change of the north pole has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09210526316 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76095620304 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8275257799 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0851955273969 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282599313513 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342113943566 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521278228123 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294251841464 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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