If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose?
if you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose?
The importance to study a particular area of climate change, in my opinion, will be the about ecosystems and water, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial because many countries around the world do not want to elaborate ecological production systems and do not believe in of climate change in recent years. it can be agreed that for many people like me the importance to care our environment is extremely important to avoid climate changes, but for some reasons, there are many people and politician that believe that climate change does not exist and it is a criterion for environmentalists or educators. this essay will elaborate on how to think about the importance of water and ecosystems important in a particular area of climate change.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why I choose water how the area most important in climate change, and protect the ecosystems in all countries how my country where we are rich in water, plants, animals and wildlife; but, our government does not want to think that this area is important and just sell the privilege for other countries to manipulate our systems.
On the other hand, for instance, study climate change brings the opportunity to understand the importance to recycle in each home, in each city, in each country, because our world is suffering for our behaviour. take care our systems is a big decision that everyone needs to take how priority.
To conclude, the impact of water and ecosystems if I need to choose a subject to study a particular area of climate change is prominent. Although, it has some drawbacks that should be well handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ion for environmentalists or educators. this essay will elaborate on how to think ab...
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...there are numerous reasons why I choose water how the area most important in climate ...
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...r world is suffering for our behaviour. take care our systems is a big decision that...
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...e, the impact of water and ecosystems if I need to choose a subject to study a pa...
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...ar area of climate change is prominent. Although, it has some drawbacks that should be w...
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...drawbacks that should be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97602739726 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80540077413 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465753424658 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.41167022 50.4703680194 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.444444444 104.977214359 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4444444444 20.9669160288 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400561968082 0.242375264174 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223526107519 0.0925447433944 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.295244068042 0.071462118173 413% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33030835687 0.151781067708 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.342717420004 0.0609392437508 562% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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