The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems...so who do u think Should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
Nowadays, the environmental problems have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “who is responsible for the environmental dangers, the government or individuals?”. It is a widely held view that preserving the natural ecosystem is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that the causes and solutions of this issue must be taken into account as well as the government must take a responsibility of the environmental problems.
To begin with, it is a common belief that finding the causes of the environmental crisis plays a vital role in the fast-changing world. First and foremost is that the emissions of greenhouse gases leads to the destruction of the ozone layer and subsequently cause melting the ice poles or acid rain that deteriorate the monuments. Secondly, a wide variety of disease, such as cancer or heart attack rooted in the toxic gases that are emitted from the destructive vehicle. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that deforestation and overfishing is the other prominent reason for the environmental problems.
However, there is no doubt that various efficient solution should be considered to address the environmental problems. One possible approach would be encouraged people to leave their private cars and use the public transport system. The alternative approach would be offering loan to factories to relocate to the less beautiful areas. Lastly, the government should put adequate investment to equip the public transport system and make them convenient for citizens.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that it would be rational to lay a blame for the environmental problems on the government. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the environmental problems have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42372881356 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25900780279 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.406482004 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129124622433 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463690548508 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441706460192 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727537714527 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285478460601 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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