Some people think that air travel should be restricted because it causes environment pollution.Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86746987952 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8384693801 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611445783133 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.125470965 49.4020404114 375% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 389.6 106.682146367 365% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.4 20.7667163134 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.2 7.06120827912 428% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139884466001 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069792387658 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522040991237 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069792387658 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522040991237 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 13.0946893788 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.43 50.2224549098 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.65 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.19 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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