Some people think that air travel should be restricted because it causes environment pollution.Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Transportation modes have undergone dramatic change over a couple of decades.Thus ,the use of air craft is gaining prevelanc in this high tech era.Presently ,the ratio of quality environment is being degraded by the air pollution.Therefore , some masses assert that it is much essential to impose the restriction over air craft so that,the figure of air pollution can be plunged.Here I would like to discord with give statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view.First and foremost, air craft play agagantic role to promote commercialisation , social meetings and business associates worldwide.To justify, folks of different nations travel to another countries frequently for education, environment, employment and business meetings.Hence , limiting air travel could deprive people of privileges blessed by international platform.Apart from it, airline services are lucrative in order to promote the branded goods which is manufactured by the topmost foreign countries.To demonstrate,under the instruction of air travel one nation can import and export by establishment their stores.As a result,a nation not only enhance financial states but also can developments strong relationship.
Further emphasizing on my point of view.The ratio of unemployment could be mashrumed if the number of airline services decline.For example, people who are earning their bread and butter in the airline department may lose their jobs.Thence,they will not fulfill the desire of their family.Besides this, working and earning opportunities could be minimize in the absence of jetway system.consiquently, this trand has more negative outcomes than positive.On the contrary,others have contrasting views.
On the other hand, the rising number of flights are the biggest responsible factor for deforestation in front of administration.Government have to cut the trees in order to establishment the air port on the land.Therefore, masses have to face many health problems in this modern world.Plunging airline network is the need of an hour.
To recapitulate,the lifestyle of people has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades.Undeniable, airplane services have a vital role to promote environment concerns.However ,we can not the importance of jetway system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86746987952 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8384693801 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611445783133 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.125470965 49.4020404114 375% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 389.6 106.682146367 365% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.4 20.7667163134 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.2 7.06120827912 428% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139884466001 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069792387658 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522040991237 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069792387658 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522040991237 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 13.0946893788 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.43 50.2224549098 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.65 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.19 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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