some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throuhout their courses.
It is true that, universities provided diffrent type of knowledge such as related to study and so on .However, few masses think that universities should not give more theoretical knowledge but provided much practical training throetical knowledge but provided much practical traning througout their courses .in my opnion both ways are correct because we need both aspect in our lifev to get success.
To embark with, universities is the best way to getting good knowledge most of time universities provided theoritical knowledge because if one can want to good in future they can get good job only if those have good academic score also they can easily prmote their position .Morever ,if student take addmision in universities they read books and they are aware about history and culture and try to maintain their culture.Apart from tha , The persons who do study in universities and they can improve their writing and reading skills because they are spend most of time on reading books so it might happend they can enhance their reading skills.
On the other hand , in universities classrooms practies traning also impotant because most of student do not like theory work and they give preference practical work if theortical work countinue going on they can loss their intrest and may not get good score.Apart from this many student want to do practical work and they can easily understand rather than other work beacause some learner week in their study so if they do other type practical work such as sports and kind of skills they may be it happend they success in their life and make future bright.
To sum up, both ideas are good and universities staff should give equal importance because for successful must include the ways then they can bright their future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, apart from, kind of, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99662162162 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55360308167 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.423409206 49.4020404114 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 369.75 106.682146367 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.0 20.7667163134 356% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.25 7.06120827912 386% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268534876519 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194102719893 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141505982228 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194102719893 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141505982228 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.1 13.0946893788 299% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.83 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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