Essay topics:
The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog.
The diagram describes the many stages of development during the life cycle of a frog.
Overall, the life cycle of a frog consists of 7 stages, beginning with mating and ends with the development into an adult frog.
The cycle begins with adult frogs mating. The female frog then lays a large number of eggs into the water, which are known as frogspawn. In the next step, the frogspawn hatches and small tadpoles emerge. Over time, these tadpoles grow bigger and start to form their limbs.
The fifth stage is the development into young frogs of the tadpoles. Although their tails still exist, t...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...frogs mating. The female frog then lays a large number of eggs into the water, which are known as...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
... the next stage, the young frog becomes larger in size, its tail disappears and its limbs are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and its limbs are fully developed. The frog then leaves the water and continues...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73939393939 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24913002261 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0493376382 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1666666667 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.75 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272424126519 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108411577303 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107946867646 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212305539157 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107705511037 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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