It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that undergraduate should stay in halls of residence, homestay and so on instead of inhabiting at parent-owned house. While I disagree with the idea of letting students live far from their home, I do believe that this tendency could benefit young people.
On the one hand, staying far away from home is not a good way. Firstly, they can have bad relationship outside as they lack parental control or sometimes neglect with their studying because of some reasons like doing part time job to deal with daily cost. For example, poor family can not afford for regular demand so students now tend to take part in part time job than going to extra classes. As a result, they may receive bad result after graduating. Secondly, students get used to living with their parents and the care of them so they may suffer from serious homesickness. Therefore, their academic performance and social life will be adversely affected.
On the other hand, students should not allow to live close to their family. First and the foremost, students live far away from their family and have to deal with daily problems by themselves, this can help them become indepently. They have to go shopping and cook their own meals, for example. On top of that, living in a different place will offer students a chance to learn about new people and cultures apart from those of their own when they live at home, they will have life experience. Consequently, undergraduate will open the door to explore new life besides their home.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that staying with family is a safe way for students, but it is also better for them to live far away from their home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ying because of some reasons like doing part time job to deal with daily cost. For exampl...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...nd so students now tend to take part in part time job than going to extra classes. As a r...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'living'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: living
...e other hand, students should not allow to live close to their family. First and the fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75684931507 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47964834991 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7261703301 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9285714286 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430011908425 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15142324062 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111766113816 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299236818894 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531181112934 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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