You are working for a company. Your computer is giving some problem and it is affecting your work. Write a letter to the manager in your letter.
-Describe the problem
-Explain how it is affecting your work
-Write what want him to regarding it
Dear Sir
I am employer at your company. The purpose of mine to penning down this pistol is to inform you computer is giving some problem and it is affecting my work.
Yesterday, I was go to office and just start the computer and the computer will take five minutes to start then no image is show in screen and immidietely shut down. It is affecting my work. Tomorrow I will give you a presentation that it is the stored in my computer now but due to this problem I do not give your presentation on time. This problem is the occuring from two days and my daily schedule is also upset I do not do any work.
This is a major problem in computer the problem is normal I able to solve them but now I do not think how to solve this problem. I would be grateful if you concerned with technician and correct this problem as soon as possible that my work I do not late more days.
Thanking you
Yours sincerl
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
... affecting my work. Yesterday, I was go to office and just start the computer a...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the occuring from two days and my daily schedule is also upset I do not do any w...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I do not late more days. Thanking you Yours sincerl Aman
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26704545455 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37230028159 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1530740784 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4444444444 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315306774472 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152679785522 0.0766984524023 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695072532958 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234132654115 0.12726935374 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791877559128 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.