Essay topics:
The flow chart illustrate the consequences of deforestation.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
Write at least 150 words.
The flow chart provides information regarding the repercussions of deforestation.
Overall, there are four different pathways that lead to two main consequences.
Firstly, as heavy logging equipment is involved in the clearing of areas of forests, it compresses the soil, making the soil hard and ‘baked’. This results in rain water running off and then, flooding.
Secondly, as areas of woodland being cut down, there are increasingly fewer roots the hold the top soil in place and cause it to erode. In addition, with less trees, the risk of forest fire, regardless of being deliberate...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n water running off and then, flooding. Secondly, as areas of woodland being cut...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun trees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nd cause it to erode. In addition, with less trees, the risk of forest fire, regardl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50909090909 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19687634504 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9182466716 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0541418580746 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320152919464 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753960340185 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720344068794 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995364816027 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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