You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Estimable Manager,
I am writing to you to express my delight with the excellent service and high quality of food that your hotel provided us last Sunday night,on the occasion of my father' 90th birthday ,party had been pretty remunerative from all respects.
Most of the people in that party were in their 90s or 80s excluded me and my brother so party was arranged to keep in mind the choice and age requirements of elderly people.Your staff went out of their way to make the party fully enjoyable by providing amazingly cozy seating arrangements and soothing environment by providing less noisy place with melodious classical music. The waiters were professional and polite and obviously they were seasoned enough to avoid to encroach too much on the proceedings. In your staff Mr Johnson was just a bright boy , he got his all colleagues more organized to follow our requirements.
In terms of offering the diversity of dishes your hotel did wonder, as you did in your soft food list which was beyond all praise. The quality, quantity and the presentation of the food provided by you made all the guests feel gratified. Mutton cream was ordered by some of the guests and to surprise us that was deliciously succulent and the arouma was just mouth watering to make us do over eating.
The same goes with the variety of beverages served in hotel at the correct temperature to consume with full enjoyment
All the food was not only incredibly tasty but also fully nutritious and fresh to satisfy the hunger and fun requirements of elderly peopl( with poor stomuch and weak teeth) in a safer but astounding way.
All -in-all ,me with my guests enjoyed so much at your establishment, and I had a congratulations once again.
Yours sincerely,
X.y.z.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 937.175257732 155% => OK
No of words: 300.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73808980737 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.171160667 44.8134815571 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.5 76.5299724578 190% => OK
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Language errors: 74.0 2.54639175258 2906% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210375764992 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754663619926 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052804048737 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088703386051 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545272920776 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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