Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about where is the most suitable place to teach children how to be a good members of society, at home or at school. A number of individuals hold a contentious view as to whether parents should teach children how to well behave in society. While others argue that teachers had better educate students to behave well. Personally, I believe that youngsters need to learn social behaviors both at homes and at schools. These opinions will now be discussed.
On the one hand, parents play vital role on educating children how to become good people for several reasons. Parents have a long-term interaction with childrens, and they have tendency to follow adults behaviors, especially their family members. As a result, parents can easily impart advices on their children in order to regulate their behaviors. It is undeniable the fact that if parents have good parenting styles, they will have positive influence on their offsprings.
On the other hand, teachers also have significant impact on youngsters. Firstly, no sooner do children come to school than they are accustomed to the educational systems. It is considered to be an oriented service to educate children well. For instance, there is a variety of teaching curriculums and extra-activities to provide students not only theoretical knowledge but also social rules. Therefore, children process in the acquisition of basic skills to become good citizens. Secondly, there are a tremendous peer pressure in schooling system. As a result, the young who cooperate with a group of well-mannered people, so they tend to establish proper behaviours.
To sum up, for the reasons mentioned above, social behaviours are both taught at home and at school. They are equally important with the responsiblity of families and teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'member'?
Suggestion: member
...lace to teach children how to be a good members of society, at home or at school. A num...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... of individuals hold a contentious view as to whether parents should teach children how to we...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...children how to well behave in society. While others argue that teachers had better e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nteraction with childrens, and they have tendency to follow adults behaviors, esp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23793103448 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90075434037 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4503138804 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278739341974 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797428351874 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751654583987 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153432746891 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117553896013 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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