Most countries believe that international tourism effects.why do they think so? how change their views.
It is indeed fact that,the huge number of tourism are increasing day by day in whole world.It has great disastrous effect on human life style.Government as well as individual of every nation should take joint responsibilities to address this problem.Which creates imbalance between people.
There are manifold points to shore up its demerits.Having some tourism in country is very harmful.To be specific,Sometime they show disrespect for local culture and bad behave with laymen.Owing to that,masses can be attracted towards the western culture.Secondly,the majority of tourists stay in modern dezine hotels and enjoy the best facilities.they may be taking two showers a day.Where local people do not waste water.Which effects on drinking water and leads to more problems.
Next,we can see that,increasing the population is the main reason foe spreading the pollution.For instance,when tourism stay in country and more use vehicles for seen different recreational places.It has destructive impact on local human health because they can not feel better environment.Over and above,most of tourism live in aristocratic life style in their place.Therefore,they can not follow the rules and regulation with religious place Thus,they do not cover the head and do not take his shoes inside the temple.
On the other hand,there are many measure to overcome this problems.Firstly,official should provide much opportunity to them.such as, transport, house facilities,and so forth.they can use the transport vehicles foe commuting one place to another.which help them for reducing the pollution.What is more,we should motivate the tourism related to culture,rituals.it help them to know about traditional values and customs.
To conclude,Rising tourists has bad impact on cultural and rituals value.which creates problem in ever time for adopting the value.Thus,providing some amenities is the best path to address this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80281690141 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.85094737376 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.867593619 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 329.6 106.682146367 309% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.8 20.7667163134 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.2 7.06120827912 385% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133015089657 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640231493505 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579385987463 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640231493505 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579385987463 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 13.0946893788 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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