Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Is this good or bad thing.
Undoubtedly, sports and cultural occasions are the intrinsic part of the nation and every citizen show their diligent interest in attending them. People spend an extortionate amount of money for watching live gathering to cherish those for a lifetime. However, some people argue that civilian should not invest exorbitantly on buying tickets just for the sake of entertainment. Alternatively, this additional amount can be used for other welfare of the homeland. I agree that people should spend reasonably on events and should utilize money worthwhile.
The key reason which discourages the investment of money in big-budget occasions is that it encourages the money minded people to take advantage of the tournament or ceremony by raising the price of hotels and transportation, because of that mediocre people cannot afford to attend it. Moreover, it ensues in the emergence of a class difference in communities, which indirectly tear apart the brotherhood of society. For example, in New Year time, there is an increase in the price of accommodation and rental services in every country that makes it difficult for an average family to go outside and enjoy the bash. Thus, overprice events needs to be discouraged so all people can involve in it and bring togetherness in society.
The other factor is that the expensive ticket is not contributing in the commonwealth, it only aids money to the organizer's account, in spite of investing the hefty amount in such event, these amounts of money can be donated for health and educational enhancement which will certainly help the nation to grow and achieve great goals.
To conclude, Cultural and sports occasions bring people together without a doubt, but paying a huge amount of money for them cannot be justified, as it castigates the country. Therefore, these amount needs to be regulated so all civilian can afford it and can cherish those gathering with gratification.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 937.175257732 173% => OK
No of words: 311.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22508038585 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95622749882 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 290.88556701 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4779982426 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.416666667 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192520689211 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716910904301 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480220558034 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115126751518 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556069827418 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 8.37731958763 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 70.7449484536 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 41.2886597938 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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