SOme students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh this disadvantages?
There has been an accelerated tendency among school learners opt for a gap year before entering to the higher education. While there are several reasons for this, I think it would be better to attend university immediately after high school.
Obviously, the option to acquire an education later in life is reasonable in certain cases.It is indeed the case that a gap year might provide valuable time for one to discover their potential.A part-time job during this stage, therefore, might be helpful later when a person needs to decide on an academic pathway that best suits their abilities and interests.Apart from this, the invaluable experiences and knowledge one can gain from a gap year are other feasible reasons.A friend of mine decided to travel to different parts of Vietnam before entering university, thus helping him to develop the knowledge relevant to his future career as a cultural expert.
Despite these reasons, in my view, the drawbacks involved in taking a gap year surpass its benefits.Firstly, this is particularly the case for students who have a huge desirable for leaving but not coming back. For the vast majority of people who already got into the habit of spending money earned from their jobs through out the gap year, university life could become less attractive than working life.Secondly, a year out might be spent as a year off, particularly when high school leavers have little experience in time management. As a matter of fact, some of these peple tend to spend part of their time on unhealthy hobbies such as video games instead of usefull activities.
In conclusion, I strongly argue that the negative aspects associated with taking a gap year that far beyond the potential impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79901490828 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638596491228 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.222514435 49.4020404114 371% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.285714286 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.7142857143 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240966442213 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106829532683 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036416573697 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1401546854 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300347275609 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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