Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With development of transportation and the improved life quality of people,tourism in foreign country is increasing day by day.As per opinion,people benefit more from travelling to foreign country than in their own country.In the following paragraphs,I will support my view points.
To commence with,travelling in foreign country will help us know the different culture of those countries.We can able to meet people from different backgrounds and cultures Culturally we can broaden our horizon.Travelling in various country will give us knowledge about their habitat.As an example last year,my friend and his family went for europe tour.He told that he was trying to understand the culture and the way of living from past one month through internet before his trip.He found lots of new things.And when he reached he was bit comfortable to understand their habitat.He was telling people were very open minded and friendly.He didn't face any kind of problem to mingle with local people.He enjoyed different kinds of food.The main thing he realized that he got a very good understanding of diferent kind of people and about their culture.
Another salient example to corroborating my view point is the language barrier.We all know that english is the main language in many country but their have some countries,people have their own language to communicate.Travelling in foreign country and staying their for some time we can learn so mnay new languages.And if we learn new languages we can able to communicate of with people so comfortably.Language is one of the main reason to understand the people from different country.My cousin got a offer from his office for a business trip to Germany.And he was very fused that how he will manage to communicate with local people because he went their for almost 2 years.And ouside work place if he needs to communicate with local people he has to know at least beginner knowledge of Gerany.Then he started learning that language and when he reached their he was very comfortable withh local people.Now he is telling how he was comfortable to know those people.And he also learned so many new things from people there.
Last but not least ,if we travel outside country the we can able to move from our comfort zone.I mean to say inside our own country we are very comfortable and we are not able to that are we really can able to handle the situation if we move from that comfort zone.Practically speaking that we can understand when we travel in different country and all are new people in our surrounding.
To conclude ,travelling in foreign country will increase our special skills to know different cultures as well as broaden our communication skill with different people.And also it will help to know and improve our potential ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, well, as to, at least, i mean, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2333.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08278867102 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12657647687 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455337690632 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 20.1344086022 452% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 319.713246519 48.9658058833 653% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 466.6 100.406767564 465% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.8 20.6045352989 446% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6 5.45110844103 305% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246588755779 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166963190179 0.076458572812 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891950481269 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166963190179 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891950481269 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.4 11.7677419355 411% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.43 58.1214874552 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 10.1575268817 370% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.01818996416 136% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 10.0537634409 382% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 38.0 10.247311828 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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