You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir
I am working as a 'Lab Analyst' in your quality control department. I am inscribing this missive regarding the training course on ' Various aspects of microbiology', that I have seen today morning on web portal of company site. I am keen interested in attending the workshop.
Firstly, I want to say, it would be really helpful from your side, if you suggest my name for the training and Moreover, I want some day off from the work also, as I have read all the instructions ad the training will be from 1st april 2018-15th april 2018, in New Delhi. So I have to go out of town for 15 days. I assure you that, my work will not get impacted by this gap.
Further, as this session is regarding the job and work, I am doing presently, it would enhance my skills in a better way and organization will get profit from it. By having certification in this area, we can have more chances of passing the audit from our foreign customer's. In addition to this, I will share all the points with my team also, so that they can also have benefit from this.
I hope to hear a positive response from your side.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully
Anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...missive regarding the training course on Various aspects of microbiology, that I ...
^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...pects of microbiology, that I have seen today morning on web portal of company site. I am kee...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... morning on web portal of company site. I am keen interested in attending the wor...
^
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'instructions'' or 'instruction's'?
Suggestion: instructions'; instruction's
...m the work also, as I have read all the instructions ad the training will be from 1st april ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47641509434 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52835028819 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0789527068 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2727272727 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254858344791 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09397685608 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648035919219 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130916344576 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774472907809 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.