the number of marriages and divorces
Given are two bar charts illustrating the amount of marriages and divorces in United States of America, as well as the percentage of American adults' marital status for a period of 30 years from 1970 to 2000.
Overall, despite the fluctuation between 1970 and 1980, American tended to marry less in the period given. Similarly, the cases of divorces slightly reduced after reaching a peak in 1980 during 30 years. Unsurprisingly, most of people in US were either married or never married.
With respects to marriages, the number of that in 2000 was the least over the period, which accounted for only two millions whereas in both 1970 and 1980 that was straightly higher in comparison (2.5 millions). On the other hand, the figure of divorces in 1980 was the greatest but suddenly dropped continually and return to the same level as 1970 (just under 1.5 millions and 1 millions respectively).
The percentage of American residents who got married In 1970 stood at nearly three fourth (70%) as well as just under 60% in 2000, followed by that of whom have never married (approximately 15% in both 1970 and 2000). Interestingly, the proportion of widowed American in 1970 was higher than that in 2000, and the reverse would be true for divorced people. Ratios of both widowed and divorced American were below 10 percent.
- The graph below shows Long-Term International Migration in UK, 1999-2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- the number of marriages and divorces 84
- The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. 73
- The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. 73
- The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...n 1980 during 30 years. Unsurprisingly, most of people in US were either married or never marr...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d, which accounted for only two millions whereas in both 1970 and 1980 that was s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, similarly, so, well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90625 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66163919087 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3410847473 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.111111111 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159833227143 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630927215993 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503410724462 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092070402408 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357750720164 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.