You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say
-describe what you left and where it happened
-why are these papers important
-what would you like the manager to do about it
Dear Manager,
I am inscribing this epistle to draw your attention about my lost documents that i forgot in one of your taxi on 30.04.018.The number of taxi is xy 4569.
I took a taxi from Nehru chowk to Royal street in jalandhar. Actually, i was going for a job interview. I got late on account of heavy gridlock. Therefore, in hurry and nervousness i did not remember to carry file of documents with me. This file comprised all my credentials and some Id proofs such as passport, voter card and pan card, that are really valuable for me.
I sensed about this incident just after my arrival at 'Rehman corporations ' my interview spot. I described the whole situation to the chief executive, and on my humble request, he allowed me for interview. I am delighted to inform that i got selected for the job profile of HR manager. However, i was promised to submit all the required documents before 15. 04.2018.I Don not want to lose this job at any cost.
I would be grateful if you get resolved this concern of mine. As per the company's tenure i will be appointed only after submission of my original papers. I tried to find this lost file on my behalf but did not get success. It is now possible only with your cooperation.My email address is heenasharma51@gmail.com. for any further details. The file description is below
Brand - Natraj
Colour-Black
Size-Large
I await a favourable response.
Yours sincerely,
Heena Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... attention about my lost documents that i forgot in one of your taxi on 30.04.018...
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...forgot in one of your taxi on 30.04.018.The number of taxi is xy 4569. I took a ...
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...to Royal street in jalandhar. Actually, i was going for a job interview. I got la...
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...ck. Therefore, in hurry and nervousness i did not remember to carry file of docum...
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...e Id proofs such as passport, voter card and pan card, that are really valuable f...
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... after my arrival at Rehman corporations my interview spot. I described the whole...
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...e request, he allowed me for interview. I am delighted to inform that i got selec...
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...nterview. I am delighted to inform that i got selected for the job profile of HR ...
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...e required documents before 15. 04.2018.I Don not want to lose this job at any co...
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...ern of mine. As per the companys tenure i will be appointed only after submission...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81927710843 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05141016581 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1429346954 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6666666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0735580633057 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200469767897 0.0766984524023 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318894682678 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0402929713566 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304058613785 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.