How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems it cause
The importance of people spending too much time on work than their personal life was always a debatable topic. Many people state that spending too much time in office is creating a huge gap between personal life and professional life. I completely agree with the statement. The following essay would further elaborate the reasons for this problem with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, organizations dump a lot of work and put pressure on the employees to complete the work within the deadline. The pressure from the company and heavy load of work leading to a gap in family bonds. For example, workers are asked to work on weekends to support the project and to meet the demands of the clients. This example clearly exemplifies us allocating too much time on work are the main reasons for shortage of time.
Moreover, working for long hours in office and sitting at the same place without moving can cause so many diseases such as obesity, back pain and many more. Work pressure creates no balance between personal life and professional life and in some cases it lead to depression. And in few more cases it may impact relationships between wife and husband and can end up with divorce between couples. For example, the elder family member working for 16 to 18 hours per day will not be able to spend time with his wife and children. This example clearly explains us professional work will impact our personal life if we don't give enough time to families.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that for a healthy lifestyle and family bonding one has to divide his/her time between professional life and personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, such as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86254295533 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61109145027 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5888252797 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297356693484 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109511616752 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108861649268 0.071462118173 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191563150449 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970009941295 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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