The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are several factors that lead to degradation of agricultural land, which take place in almost every parts of the world. As we can see from the pie chart, over-gazing, deforestation and over-cultivation are three main causes, accounting for 93%. The rate of each cause is nearly the same as one another. Agricultural land in Europe has been seriously unproductive, which mainly due to deforestation. Over-cultivation in Europe is also very high that it ranks the highest among the three regions. Oceania, in contrast, does not have any degraded land resulted from over-cultivation. Land of this region becomes less productive mainly because of over-grazing with 11.3%. Of the three regions, North America has total land degraded of only 5%, make its land the most productive. To sum up, degradation of land results form some reasons and the extent of affect it has are different in each region.
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. 56
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 871, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...reasons and the extent of affect it has are different in each region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12244897959 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16635793522 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680272108844 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7417989148 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222827871668 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879837649435 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485926539419 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222827871668 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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