Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree.
It is true that fast food chains are easily found in numerous countries and becoming more irreplaceable in this day and age. Albeit its generally acknowledged benefits, I am of the opinion that this new kind of meal also brings detrimental impact to humanity for some reasons.
First of all, pre-prepared food is inextricably linked to deterioration in people health status. Apparently, higher level of obesity become a wide spread trend in big cities which is mainly caused by the habits of having fast food. As many international fast food corporations such as KFC, Burger King, McDonald and so on expand globally, it is definitely hard for the people to resist such appealing meals considering its time efficiency and affordable prices. Moreover this expansion is not only responsible for obesity but also for diabetes and heart diseases.
Secondly, fast food possibly jeopardizes family values since it set superficial trends causing less interaction among family members during daily meals. No doubt, the more the people eat in fast food serving restaurants, the more likely they will skip having dinner at home. It weakens close-knit relationships and widens gap between generations. The situation might get worse if one starts actively following this trend and forgets about his or her traditions and customs.
All in all, the advantages of fast food are far outweighed by its drawbacks. I personally believe that people should not have pre-prepared food on regular basis because of those aforementioned potential effects.
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- Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree. 85
- Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree. 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... time efficiency and affordable prices. Moreover this expansion is not only responsible ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of, no doubt, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36625514403 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93230018801 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695473251029 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9126650743 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230838532026 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803333676599 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558621906324 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137947440475 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175695581026 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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