Diary 1
It is not simple to bring up a child from when he was born to the time when he starts to enter adult life. I still remember in details a sense of happiness when my baby came to this world. He who was only over 20 days old spent a difficult long journey to go to our hometown because of the breakdown of train capacity. He waited for hours at Bien Hoa train station that made me get my cold feet… At the first time he was sick, I actually did not know what I should do because I have not experienced before yet, however I gradually assimilated knowledge and beneficial skills for child-minding. Collected knowledge seems to help me find more confident when my son had illnesses again.
As my mother returned the hometown, I felt difficult even stressful and irritable because there were so many tasks that I had to do from work to household assignments. I always get up early to practice English, wash dishes, and prepare clothes, orange juice and milk for my son going to school. I am up to the ears with a lot of assignments at the office, and then go to market and prepare dinner for my family. After my son goes to bed, I often set aside time to mediate something happened in the day. Sometimes, I am truly tired with a lot of troubles I have to face every day. These are dysfunctional moments between my hubby and me about our residential apartment, unfriendly colleagues and the ways to enhance my livelihood. However I believe that it is better if I can keep a positive attitude because it is true that the life is not simple and I have to ease fundamental issues, keep calm and find solutions. Luckily, I have my son besides. While I am riding a motorbike to go home with unpleasant feeling, I have a sense of more satisfaction when I image his face and languages like “please open a car program for me, mommy”.
Having a child makes me have a good grasp of expectation of my parents. I hope I will be a good mother to make a valuable contribution to shape my son’s good personality.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-04-06 | quynhbong89 | 11 | view |
- Diary 1 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 731, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... and the ways to enhance my livelihood. However I believe that it is better if I can ke...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o shape my son's good personality.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41935483871 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75851512804 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6561737804 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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