Essay topics: You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say
- Why did you move there
- Describe the new apartment
- Invite him/her to visit you
Dear Raman,
Hi! How are you? I am fine and hope this missive of mine finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to invite you to visit in my new apartment.
Yes, I am working in a software development company which is situated in the outskirt area of the city and my old apartment was in the city centre. Due to this, I had to face a plethora of problems such as traffic congestion etcetera. To overcome myself from this problem I recently shifted to a new apartment which is near to my organisation.
Even though, my new apartment is not too big as my old one, but I am satisfied with it. Primarily, it is well equipped and containing two bedrooms along with one bathroom ,kitchen and a little garden. It gives me the opportunity Who is it in the great ambience which will not only relax my body but also my mind.
Finally, I shifted to my new house, last Sunday. I intend to organise a party in which all our college friends are invited, so it will be a great time to get together after a long time. It would be very grateful if you come at that party to make it perpetuate to all of us.
Pay my regards to your family.
Yours truly,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raman, Hi! How are you? I am fine and hope this...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing two bedrooms along with one bathroom ,kitchen and a little garden. It gives m...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oms along with one bathroom ,kitchen and a little garden. It gives me the opportu...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ast Sunday. I intend to organise a party in which all our college friends are inv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25862068966 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44510175497 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0998285925 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5714285714 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184721697179 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680374633482 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06728741589 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978254802361 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811917323667 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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