You feel that the streets around your neighbourhood are too dirty and have too
much rubbish. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should:
• say who you are
• explain the problem and its effects on your life
• give suggestions on how to solve the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Steve Smith, resident of the woodshire community. I am writing to you concerning the hygiene conditions around my neighbourhood and how its affecting the local residents.
It has come to my notice that for the past two weeks the rubbish disposed by residents have not been picked up by the municipal workers and neither have they cleaned the streets. This has resulted in growth of mosquitoes in the locality. As a result, 14 locals have been admitted in hospital and diagnosed with malaria. Moreover, walking down the street is next to impossible, due to the rotting smell of degrading waste.
I would like you to look into the matter and take strict action against those who have failed to perform their duty and putting the health of innocent residents at risk. In addition, it would be a good idea to appoint clean-up marshalls to supervise the work of municipal workers and maintain hygiene in the locality.
Looking forward to a prompt action.
Your faithfully,
Steve Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94186046512 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65238649849 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68023255814 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4166639118 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168755338755 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056772432792 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704065555554 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753422875171 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619836487985 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.